Here is something to think about when trying to write more engaging webiste copy - tell a story.
It's really that simple. Why does your website have to be a stuffy replication of your brochure? It doesn't! Tell a story and you will not only draw the attention of your new visitors, you may also better engage existing customers who are looking for a new way to use your product or service.
Stories, especially those that touch the heart or tickle the funny bone, will draw attention because people naturally enjoy stories.
That reminds me, this one time... at band camp....
Just kidding, I've never been to band camp but I have been to computer camp. I think it was 1985 and computers only did one thing well back then - Oregon Trail.